英语:短文写作(大作文)--图表作文(2)
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There are a lot of similarities/differences between...and...
……与……之间有许多相似(不同)之处
It can be drawn from the chart that the proportions of A and B are going down, though the falling level of the latter is a lot lower/higher than that of the former.
尽管B的下降速度比A要慢/快,从表中我们可以看到A和B的比例都在下降。
The increase/decrease is more noticeable during the second half of the 5year period.
在5年期限的后半段,增长/降低比较明显。
It falls from 50% in 2000 to 30% in 2004, and then the trend reverse, finishing at 58% in 2005.
从2000年的50%降到2004年的30%,然后形势逆转,2005年达到了58%。
The table shows the changes in the number of...over the period from...to...
该表格描述了在……年之……年间……数量的变化。
As can be seen from the graph, the two curves show the fluctuation of...
如图所示,两条曲线描述了……的波动情况。
3.必背经典范文
Directions: the table below shows the number of road accidents which occurred in Britain in different places and the ages of the injured persons. Write a report describing the information shown below.
Road accidents in Britain
when/where accidents occurredAge
2-4Age
5-7Age
8-11Age
11-13Age
14-16TOTAL
Going to school21383127
Going home from school21692231
Playing in the street89812651202
Cycling into the street110259247
Shopping for their parents432132152
TOTAL9815281217359
The chart above organizes data about road accidents involving children in Britain by and by when and where the accidents occurred. It can be seen that the incidence of accidents decreases as the childrens age increase and that age correlates with the circumstances surrounding the accident.
For all ages, the most common situation leading to accident is playing in the street but young children were particularly affected. Children between the ages of 5-7 seemed to get into accidents while engaged in activities appropriate to their age, such as shopping for their parents or going home from school. In fact, this age group accounted for the most road accidents of all. Children between 8 and age 11 had the most accidents cycling in the street. After age 11, the number of accidents dropped considerably in all situations.
From the chart, we get to know that playing in the street is the most common and universal site of accidents of all ages, but the risks that other sites and situations present vary with the childrens ages.
题目:表格给出了英国在不同地点和不同年龄段的人所发生的交通事故。请描述一下这个表格。
译文
上面的图表中的数据反映了英国不同年龄段的孩子在不同地点发生交通事故的情况。我们可以看到随着年龄的增长,孩子出现交通事故的次数在不断下降,而且年龄段与发生事故的地点也有关系。
就所有的年龄段看,最容易出现事故的情况是在马路上玩耍,尤其是对那些年龄小的孩子。处在5至7岁之间的孩子在做适合他们年龄段的事情时,比如替父母上街买东西,或者从学校回家,也很容易出事。事实上,这个年龄段的孩子发生事故最多。8至11岁的孩子在街上骑车最容易发生事故。11岁以后,在所有场合的事故发生都有所减少。
从表中我们知道,对所有的年龄段的孩子来说,在马路上玩耍都是最容易发生事故的,但是其他情况的危险性则随着年龄的变化而不同。